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When a person is happy,
Their talents show through,
Untainted by hate,
Untainted by rue.
But when one's true talent
Is dirtied by anger,
It's locked away,
Far like a stranger.
When the talent is fleeting,
One wonders, "what's the use?"
"What good is it?"
"What good am I, if I always lose?"
The pressure put on,
Often by themselves,
Makes the person wonder,
Makes the person dwell.
"If I can't do what I do best,
"Then what good am I over the rest?"
Their talents show through,
Untainted by hate,
Untainted by rue.
But when one's true talent
Is dirtied by anger,
It's locked away,
Far like a stranger.
When the talent is fleeting,
One wonders, "what's the use?"
"What good is it?"
"What good am I, if I always lose?"
The pressure put on,
Often by themselves,
Makes the person wonder,
Makes the person dwell.
"If I can't do what I do best,
"Then what good am I over the rest?"
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Nice work, good story procession and theme, just had a little problem with the word "dwell" and you could have continued over giving him a good reason; a good... ending based on motivation but it is not necessary 